by Jerry Lee
Here are a collection of essays sent to me by students from our tuition centre or from my online essay writing course. I have looked through them, gave them marks and added in comments for further improvements. Do take a look at the essays to see what a model compo is supposed to be like and learn from the mistakes made as well.
Feel free to send me your essays or compositions. If the essay is good, I will feature it in this blog post as a sample essay or a model essay for other students in Singapore to take a look. All sample essays sent to me will be evaluated and marked. I will also give comments on how to improve your composition writing.
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Written by Kylia Chong, P5 28.10.15
Written by Mathi Malar, P4 28.10.15
Written by Anwen Wong, P5 28.9.15
Written by Derrick Png, P6 6.9.15
Written by Jeric Wong, P6 6.9.15
Written by Baptist Lim, P6. 12.7.15
Written by Naomi Tan, P6. 12.7.15
Written by Mathi Malar, P4. 10.7.15
Written by P6. 10.7.15
Pictures Given: A variety of fried food, a toilet signage & a digestive aid juice.
Written by Kevin, P6. 29.6.15
Written by Clar, P6. 24.6.15
Pictures Given: A Drowning Boy, An Open Umbrella and A Fire Extinguisher